Mb i’ll review it.
for the repititions i tried to make it more like how people speak normally than your typical dialogue in literature where you try to write more fluidly.
For example: that video of the old dude saying: “do you realize, do you realize.”
That’s fair. There are other ways to show emphasis, tone and stuff like that, but it requires text styling. Either way, there’s a fine balance to get between readability and writing style, but you can ditch either, depending on what you’re going for. Good luck!
Mb i’ll review it. for the repititions i tried to make it more like how people speak normally than your typical dialogue in literature where you try to write more fluidly. For example: that video of the old dude saying: “do you realize, do you realize.”
That’s fair. There are other ways to show emphasis, tone and stuff like that, but it requires text styling. Either way, there’s a fine balance to get between readability and writing style, but you can ditch either, depending on what you’re going for. Good luck!
Thnks!