• RavuAlHemio@lemmy.world
    37·
    1 day ago

    I think the poem scans better if you use the adjective “bourgeois” (two syllables) instead of the collective noun “bourgeoisie” (three).

    • Maroon@lemmy.worldOP
      7·
      1 day ago

      Thanks for that. Although I totally don’t want to make this into a sticker and paste it around the town.