BrikoX@lemmy.zip to United States | News & Politics@midwest.socialEnglish · edit-222 days agoPregnant teen shot in road rage incident gives birth on life support before dying from her injurieswww.independent.co.ukexternal-linkmessage-square13fedilinkarrow-up173arrow-down11file-text
arrow-up172arrow-down1external-linkPregnant teen shot in road rage incident gives birth on life support before dying from her injurieswww.independent.co.ukBrikoX@lemmy.zip to United States | News & Politics@midwest.socialEnglish · edit-222 days agomessage-square13fedilinkfile-text
Katelynn Strate, 17, was seven months pregnant when she was hit by a bullet during the incident in Ponchatoula, Louisiana
minus-squareexpatriado@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up20arrow-down1·22 days agosome writers don’t like to use the same word on adjacent sentences, the title had shot, so they chose hit for the subtitle
minus-squareMagicShel@lemmy.ziplinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up11·edit-222 days agoCould’ve gone with murdered or fatally wounded. Of course it’s all half measures when it’s still passive voice. The right play is “<person> fatally wounded <person> when they chose to unleash their rage in a fit of ego.”
some writers don’t like to use the same word on adjacent sentences, the title had shot, so they chose hit for the subtitle
Could’ve gone with murdered or fatally wounded. Of course it’s all half measures when it’s still passive voice. The right play is “<person> fatally wounded <person> when they chose to unleash their rage in a fit of ego.”