• AmidFuror@fedia.io
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    6 days ago

    Wow, I wasn’t cultured enough to get the reference to William Carlos Williams. Frost, yes, of course.

    Looking up the poem, I have certainly heard it before.

    I have eaten
    the plums
    that were in
    the icebox

    and which
    you were probably
    saving
    for breakfast

    Forgive me
    they were delicious
    so sweet
    and so cold

    Edit: Markdown for Lemmy instances possibly fixed

    • The Octonaut@mander.xyz
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      5 days ago

      Never heard of the guy (not American) so I thought this was how we learned about Randall Monroe’s carbon monoxide leak.

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      This is one of those moments where my lack of cultural understanding rears up, because this is where I say “how is that a poem” and it becomes evidence of some kind of bigotry.

      • SuperNovaStar@lemmy.blahaj.zone
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        It is a poem because poems are structured in lines rather than sentences. For example, this paragraph is prose.

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        This is a poem

        Because poems are made of lines

        Rather than sentences.

          • SuperNovaStar@lemmy.blahaj.zone
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            Precisely!

            Of course, saying anything can be poetry is like saying anything can be music - while it is true, tastes vary and not everything will seem like “good poetry” to everyone. And that’s ok!

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              I think people struggle with it because when you’re a little kid poetry is taught as having to rhyme and have a particular format. Then you get older and run into shit like this.

    • MBM@lemmings.world
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      Markdown broke the formatting, here’s the proper version:

      I have eaten
      the plums
      that were in
      the icebox

      and which
      you were probably
      saving
      for breakfast

      Forgive me
      they were delicious
      so sweet
      and so cold

      • AmidFuror@fedia.io
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        Mbin doesn’t require two spaces at the ends of consecutive lines. I was aware that Lemmy might, but I was also prefacing each line with a “>”, so I figured that would keep them separate.

    • Tar_Alcaran@sh.itjust.works
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      6 days ago

      It was on the wall in my English class, with a black and white photograph of some cherries.

      I always thought it was weird, but I never forgot it.